This one I must admit they did a good job with the editing this time around, not nearly as spammy with effects like their previous work, and the lines on his outfit and darker parts add character. Great drawing though, absolutely beautiful!
While the base drawing is good, I definitely prefer the edit. Your style is SO clean, and SO crisp, that it sometimes lacks that extra something, and I think that the addition of some textures and some rougher edges in the edit helps to bring the whole work together a little better. There's a little more dynamism and life in it. But that's not to say your base drawing was good; it's still a great example of your technical skills and the composition is really nice.