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Serves You Right (Page 3 of 9) by doubleleaf Serves You Right (Page 3 of 9) by doubleleaf
Just another day in AC1, you're chased to death but bureau chiefs not letting you in.

Again I asked :iconpeachy-feet: to write a story from an idea I had and she wrote a wonderful piece! :D I'm trying my best to visually express it. She will submit the story to her gallery when the comic is finished so you won't miss anything c:
Also thanks to :iconsaphrawn: for help in German <3

Following pages will come in few days.

(I've been getting comments and notes about the German in page 2. Here's Saphrawn's comment - [link] I don't know anything about German language so if you have any doubts please ask her.)

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:iconluna-fantasma:
Luna-Fantasma Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
If you are noticed that way Altair, doing such a mess you wont be able to enter the bureau, or do you just prefer Malik to also be in trouble because of your fault? or what else? ... oh boy you might want him to come and save you!!!! :wow:
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indubitablyawesome Featured By Owner May 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
game: Can't enter bureau , you must be anonymous first.
Altair: Fuck.
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:iconmranonartist:
MrAnonArtist Featured By Owner May 22, 2014  Student Digital Artist
I hate when that happens! I have to spend like, 5 minutes running around trying to escape! UGH
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:iconindubitablyawesome:
indubitablyawesome Featured By Owner May 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I know right! Sometimes no one will be chasing me but the yellow light thing is still beeping , so then I go around looking for a nearby hiding place just to be noticed by those GOD.DAMN.ARCHERS!!
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:iconmranonartist:
MrAnonArtist Featured By Owner May 23, 2014  Student Digital Artist
ugh yes! I have to look around to see where the guards are and I swear the game is screwing with me!
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:iconnoneedtoask:
NoNeedToAsk Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2013  Student Photographer
I wanted to see what happens if you exposed the brotherhood, just because I was bored..and I tried the first time and it was opened but I forgot about it because I just...eh...naturally ran past it...and then the second time it was closed >,<
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dorothy10 Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2012
The last panel had me in tears XD
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:iconcrancpit:
crancpit Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
why did you choose german? :D
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:iconwater-sirene:
Water-Sirene Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2012  Student General Artist
-swoon-

Uh-Uhm, I mean-

How dare they injure him! D:<
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:icon12doctorwhowolf:
12doctorwhowolf Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow.
*Secretly swoons with you*
I agree. How dare they!!
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:iconthesleepywolf:
Thesleepywolf Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2012
Really excellent, line art and details and all that technical stuff.
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:iconbeast91:
Beast91 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2012  Student General Artist
Cool Story. And the translation is very good!
Cool Idea: bilingual comic! :)
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:iconlife-0r-death:
Life-0r-Death Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I love how well the background detail is. You have skillz. ^_^
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:iconsringangel:
sringangel Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2012
MY RAGE WHENEVER THAT HAPPENS.
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:iconxairven:
Xairven Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2012
As soon as i saw Alta´r say "shit" I thought of Awesome's Creed XDD
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:icon610vann1:
610vann1 Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2012  Student Writer
íNice!
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:iconschneee:
Schneee Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2012  Student Digital Artist
"Sohn einer Hure" Wie h÷flich xD
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:icontechnoshadowblood:
TechnoShadowBlood Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Stupid.. closed.. grate..
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:icontouya-dono:
touya-dono Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
YES<3
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:iconmimph:
Mimph Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2012
Grate?
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:iconchloenaruto:
chloenaruto Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2012
hahahahaha lol
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:iconnightshade-keyblade:
nightshade-keyblade Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
"I've got you, infidel!" I'm guessing would be a good translation of the German?
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:iconhunter-best-hunter:
Hunter-best-hunter Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
ALTAIR!!!!!
(good work!! i can't stop reading!!!)
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:iconemo-shinigami:
emo-shinigami Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2012
Suffering Altair: gasm mode ON
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:iconmythical-artist:
mythical-artist Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Unf!

Just makes me miss Altair. >.<

Amazing pages so far! Can't wait for more!
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:iconbailando:
Bailando Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2012
DAMN he's sexy.
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:icongwyn-a-fair3:
Gwyn-a-Fair3 Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Why a mixed language comic? Its really amazing! :)
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:iconaneasashiko:
AneaSashiko Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2012
Can't wait for the next 6 pages!
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:iconcaptainshinji5:
CaptainShinji5 Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2012
very nice!
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:iconfehy-jukraft:
Fehy-Jukraft Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2012
hey, great german :D
and nice work
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:iconkanikaniza:
KaniKaniza Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2012
Hurry Malik! >.< OMG! This is so tense! I wanna know what happens next! *explodes*
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:iconmartavasques:
MartaVasques Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Loooove it! :love:
And I missed your drawings of Altair! An entire story is just heaven! :la:

Thank you for this! :love:
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:iconnattleszami:
nattleszami Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I MISSED YOU SO MUCH
LET ME LOVE YOU ALTAIR
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:icontechnoninja13099:
TechnoNinja13099 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2012  Student General Artist
why are you so AMAZING!? :iconiloveyouplz: and yes the German is correct
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:iconrainyseasons:
RainySeasons Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
fhajskgjdsalkgdalsk
;______________________; <3
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:iconrabid-uke:
rabid-uke Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2012
AC1 :) It's like seeing an old friend.....:D
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:iconsylvano-dragon:
Sylvano-DRAGON Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Hoo that is really interesting
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:iconmarianis2305:
Marianis2305 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh Malik you jerk.
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:icondoudoukun:
DouDouKun Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2012   Digital Artist
Nice, love it already
What's gonna happen! :o *cliff hanger*
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:iconkigennaiteiru:
KigenNaiteiru Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2012
DAMN i love it!
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:iconflurffy:
Flurffy Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2012
Odd, wonder why the other pages have disabled somments. Ah well, you could make a ton as a comic artist. This should so be in a collectors set somewhere.
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twiligthvampire89 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2012
Amazing work as allways
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:iconkimberjim:
KimberJim Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2012
I was reading this in manga mode......no wonder I was confused haha!

I love how well you can capture a story in still images! You're fantastic!
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:iconakatsukichild:
AkatsukiChild Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2012
XD That happens to me all the time... Hehe
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:iconroyudai:
royudai Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2012  Student Filmographer
woooow q perfectooo! <3 _ <3
Pero q no podia entrar si lo estaban persiguiendo cerca de por alli? :C
oooh QAQ
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:iconjdmd-54:
JDMD-54 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
damn you are awesome
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:iconeva67:
eva67 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2012
this comic is just awesome !
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:iconspirited13:
Spirited13 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2012
lol!!! Good comic!!! :D
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:iconkimyona123:
kimyona123 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I love this story already. And don't worry, the German fits and is perfectly correct :D (you could say there's even some dialect in there, since it originally would be "Habe ich euch, Gottloser!", but nearly nobody, even in the old times, would talk like that XD)
(which makes me curious: Where is it 'staged', since the guards or whoever they are, are talking in German?)
I have to add, I didn't play the games, only a friend of mine, and she's still not through them :)
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RetroFluff Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
i like where this is going OuO
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